Monday 20 October 2014

Dirty Bertie, Pong, Alan Macdonald by Nathan

Dirty Bertie was having dinner one night and his sister could smell a very weird smell, everyone looks at Bertie, Bertie says it wasn't him. Then Whiffer the dog goes round the table and the smell gets stronger. Mum says it was bath time for Whiffer and it was Bertie's turn to try and do it. He goes out the front and tries to get Whiffer in the bath. A boy from school called Royston walks past with his dog Duke and Royston's dog was always clean and Royston asks "trying to give him a bath". Bertie goes quiet and tried getting him in the bath again, Royston says about the dog show. Bertie wants to go to the show so really tries to get Whiffer clean. They go to the dog show, the bad smell comes back, again everyone looks at Bertie but the person in charge goes along sniffing all the dogs, when she got to Bertie shr could really smell it. She says it's Bertie and says he is out of dog show.  At the side of the dog show Whiffer tried flipping dog biscuit up and into his mouth, but the three dogs in the final saw the biscuit and went after it, then Bertie tries sneaking out.

2 comments:

  1. Sounds like a good story, Nathan. Mrs Armstrong

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  2. Sounds like you like reading Dirty Bertie too! Simeon

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